Another old one. I submitted it to Clarkeworld, and got binned.
I ran it past Critters. Some mixed responses. Some people really liked it, they ‘got it’. Lots of people hated it, and didn’t really know what it was about. Still, somewhat encouraging.
Again, text format only for now:
I guess the main verdict on it was that it was too rushed. Which is fair enough, I wrote it in a morning, in about 4 hours or so…